Tuesday, April 06, 2010

Day Six

As I worked on this poem this morning, I thought at one point that it wanted to be a sonnet, but thirteen lines feels right. This poem is for Karl Patten:

:: bloop ::

See ya tomorrow.


H. Palmer Hall said...

Uh, Ron...this is really fine, but,w ell, I count fifteen lines, with the turn at the end of line seven. I enjoyed reading it.

Ron said...

It's the headache: I can't count simple numbers. I looked at the poem and realized it's coming out one more than a sonnet, but my brain translated that as 13, not 15.